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A Valley of Betrayal
Tricia Goyer
The Legion of Honor
Sharon Yoset, Sharon Yoset
Impostors at Blue Heron Lake
Susan Page Davis, Megan Elaine Davis
The Sacred Cipher: A Novel
Terry Brennan
Sons of Thunder
Susan May Warren
Blood Ransom PB (Mission Hope)
Harris Lisa
I'll Do Anything - Chrystal Kincaid The basic storyline was good (although it features the secret baby plot which many romance readers find overused or just plain don't like). The problem was more in the editing. I have read other Desert Breeze books which were much better edited, so don't really understand this. Problems included changing points-of-view within a paragraph, proofreading (e.g. sentences that were questions without a question mark at the end), and pacing (the whole story was very fast-paced with lots of lust and sexual tension, and no real calming moments to break the tension).